This is a rendered view of my room in occlusion and wireframe.
I will continue to work on making my room look better in my own time as I improve my skills and I will add colour to the room.
In the wire frame view it allows you to see all the slight things that a bit off that you wouldn’t be able to see otherwise such as on the box under the desk there are some extra edges on the front face of the box which shouldn’t be there and if I had more time I would go back a correct that.
also if I had more time I would add more things into the room such as a chair for the desk and so more ‘bits and bobs’ to the deck to make it look more scattered and more like a teenagers room.
In conclusion I think that my room turned out pretty good but it could be improved by little details.